2nd draft for my final

Draft 1, contents page and double page spread (all products together)

Double page spread changes

changes to the size of Jadies eyes and added corrections and chnages to the 3rd draft front cover

First draft for my Double page spreed

This is my first attemped at my double page spread. I am not yet happy with is as it needs the text adding into columns. So that it is easier for a auidnce to read. This would not be appling to the reading auidence so i will be making changes to this. however, I am happy with the photo for my double page spread. I have photoshopped this my inlarging jades eyes and lifting her brows also plumping up her lips. This makes jades apperance more appealing to the auidence.

Picture of Jade has been photoshopped and edicted (3rd draft idea)

I have inlarged Jades eyes using photoshop to make her photo come across as being more dislarable to an auidence, but i feel as though her eyes are actually to big infasct so i will be making changes to this to make them a little smaller.

 

I have also photoshopped her skin, lifted her brows and lumped up her lips so that her photo comes across as being flawless. This also makes jade seem more disarble to an auidence, it helps to draw an auidence in to buy the magazine as well

spelling corrections and added features to my 3rd draft at myl frount cover